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1	Morally Ambiguous (Released 30th June 2021; 260k words)	Hidden Truths (Released Sept 22 2022; 50-60k words)
2	Russian hero who is tattooed from head to toe, has tattoos with skulls, and end of the world scenes	Russian hero who is tattood from head to toe, has skulls, macabre and apocalyptic scenes
3	As a child, the hero was part of Project Humanitas which sought to turn him into perfect assassin and turn off his humanity	As a child, the hero was part of Project Z.E.R.O, that turned him into a hitman for the government and tried to kill his empathy
4	The hero has PTSD and has episodes where he blacks out and hurts people	The hero has PTSD and has episodes where he blacks out and hurts people
5	Only the heroine can calm him down	Only the heroine can calm him down
6	I told you, Sisi. You keep the demons at bay," is all he says before he pulls me into him, his lips on mine.	"You're the only thing that keeps the demons at bay, lisichka." I kiss her shoulder.
7	Hero and heroine get each others' initials tattood	Hero and heroine get their names tattood
8	Hero when he gets heroine's initial tattooed: "He takes the mirror, inspecting it, and a reverent smile appears on his face. "Thank you," he says, unable to take his eyes off it. "Now I can have you with me always too." "	Hero when he gets heroine's name on his body: ‘We now belong to each other.’
9	Hero's phone rings while he's having sex with the heroine. He answers and continues to fuck her.	Hero's phone rings. He answers and then starts having sex with the heroine.
10	Heroine shows hero her scars and tells her how she got them and what she's been through	Heroine shows hero her scars and tells him how she got them and what she's been through
11	Hero and heroine have a bath in blood	Heroine goes into the shower with the hero while he is covered in blood and jokes about bathing in blood
12	Hero kidnaps heroine and she comes across him out of the shower, admires his looks and he asks her "Like what you see?" She asks when she can leave	Hero holds the heroine prisoner. She comes across him in the shower, admires him. He asks "You like what you see, Miss Sandoval?" She asks how long he's going to hold her prisoner
13	Hero fucks heroine with knife handle	Hero touches heroine intimately with knife handle
14	Hero tells heroine to run if he "loses his manners" aka has an episode	Hero tells heroine she would have run away if she saw him lose it completely
15	Heroine asks hero if his episodes are why people don't cross him, and he says they would be fools to do so.	Heroine asks if people run away when he loses it, and he says "If they're clever, yes."
16	Heroine is about to marry another man and hero shows up	Heroine is about to marry another man and hero shows up
17	Heroine calms hero down with a kiss	Heroine calms hero down with a kiss
18	Hero and heroine practice knife throwing. Hero praises "Not bad."	Hero and heroine practice knife throwing. Hero praises, "Not bad."
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