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Breaker of Horizons: A LitRPG Adventure Kindle Edition
Chosen to leave his own body behind and become a monster.
Chosen to live or die on his own wits. His own strengths.
He'll adventure out into a new realm as a footsoldier for the System's relentless integration of new worlds. Fighting to break the natives into submission.
But Nic has never loved the System, or cared for his home planet, a depleted husk of a world that the System forgot long ago. With blue skies overhead and green forest to the horizons, he might just fall in love with this strange planet named Earth...
That would leave him with few friends and a thousand enemies. That would leave him clawing, biting, scratching to survive.
Don't miss the start of an action-packed LitRPG Apocalypse Series from the invader's perspective. A monster evolution story with elements of cultivation, base-building, ally-recruitment, a detailed System, power progression, and all the things readers of LitRPG have come to love.
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateOctober 18, 2022
- Reading age13 - 17 years
- File size3512 KB
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Product details
- ASIN : B0B5YBLPNB
- Publisher : Aethon Books (October 18, 2022)
- Publication date : October 18, 2022
- Language : English
- File size : 3512 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Sticky notes : On Kindle Scribe
- Print length : 684 pages
- Page numbers source ISBN : B0BJGG1581
- Best Sellers Rank: #299,013 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #308 in Role Playing & Fantasy Games
- #982 in Teen & Young Adult Coming of Age Fantasy
- #1,107 in Teen & Young Adult Sword & Sorcery Fantasy
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At least part of that life comes from the fact that the entire universe is alive and growing. All of the tropes I listed earlier are not just "the way things are." Rather, they have histories and origins independent of each other-- and interactions with each other.
Another part of what makes the book so fun is that the author really understands action sequences. Combats are generally meaningful, with all sides making plans and demonstrating what makes them unique. The fights have roots stretching both forwards and backwards in time. Nobody involved, protagonist included, is omniscient or omnipotent.
There are definitely some places where it's pretty clear this was originally an episodic serial (a number of chapters begin with a recap of what happened in the last chapter, for instance). But overall I loved this book and have already downloaded the sequel!
+A fairly unique world built by the author
+A pretty new perspective for a system-integration-apocalypse story
+The combat and dialogue are both well written, and the main character has an understandable personal code of morality/honor/conduct
Cons:
-the pacing seems odd. The language used to span a gap of time will make you think a long time has passed, when less than a day actually passed.
-some parts of this world are not tracked out explained well -- his cultivation map does not appear in the last quarter of the book, it's not always clear how many, or what, quests he has, etc
-there is a very real risk that the primary conflict of this series will get very convoluted.
6.5/10
First off the books blurb states that the whole concept is a system apocalypse as the invader. This lasts for three chapters then it turns into a generic system apocalypse cultivation story. I have read many entries into this genre and one of the consistent factors is the invaders in the system apocalypse want to destroy the inhabitants. Although monsters can grow in strength, the whole system is designed to have them be in conflict with the native inhabitants of planets. Again what this book promises in the first chapter and the description of the book falls apart after only a couple of chapters.
The MC easily works with humans inhabitants and is himself pitted against invaders.
If you make a promise at the beginning of a book then you need to accomplish that promise or the reading experience is ruined.
This book also shares many of the shortcoming of online stories which are posted semi weekly. Every three chapters or so it reads as if the author is writing a completely different story. Even in some chapters it states that "only naturally gifted warriors can succeed, no matter how much you practice you will never stand with the gifted" then a couple of paragraphs later it states that "even novices of combat can accomplish great things through practice and stand among the gifted". These two statements are completely opposed to each other. The author does this constantly in their world building like every couple of paragraphs or chapters they forget what they wrote and do or say something completely contradictory to what has happened before.
This book is also a "LUCK CULTIVATION story". This means that the MC has no challenges, trips and falls finding priceless resources and really is never challenged. If the author states that the MC is wounded yet he goes through everything like a sickle through wheat that idea isn't reflected in the described actions. Many readers, including myself, may not find this obscenely easy MC journey very enjoyable to read.
The technical writing is very good with grammar and sentence structure. I never had a problem understanding what the author was describing, my issue was the author couldn't seem to find a consistent narrative or world to build.
I wanted what the description of the book described for the story and i found a vanilla generic cultivation and system apocalypse story. This MC could be a human from Earth and nothing in the story would need to be changed other than his physical description.
Because the technical writing was so well done it made many of the narrative, character development, and other problems much more subtle. A running theme in cultivation books is to rise up in strength and challenge the heavens. That theme was very poorly executed in this book. Sadly it would have worked much better had the author just stuck to the story in the description rather than making the MC just another human like native of the world.
I am torn on looking into the second book of the series. This feels like a Royal Road net book where the author only listens to feedback that tells him everything he does smells like roses and refuses to grow or improve in his writing. Many of the shortfalls could be easily fixed in a second book but it would take changes.
In the end this book is a very generic system apocalypse story without any of the wrinkles promised in the description. There will be generic town building in the second book. There is nothing new or interesting in this story sadly. I am disappointed in what the book could have been if the author had stuck to the themes promised in the description.
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Hopefully this series can continue to entertain.