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Engines of Alchemancy: The Alchemancer Book One Paperback – October 9, 2022
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Chaos erupts in the Barony of Fallmere when a surprise elemental attack destroys Norwynne Keep. Aaron Shepherd and Shanna Bonnerman survive, but Shanna is soon lost in the fallout of the keep's destruction while Aaron is forced to flee for his life.
Unbeknownst to Aaron, Shanna becomes a captive of the enemy who destroyed their home. This enemy, a savant who claims to follow the path of science, speaks of ancient, infernal devices and a quest to reclaim the greatest of them all. Certain the savant means to kill her, Shanna is instead surprised when she finds herself embarking upon the adventure of a lifetime.
Meanwhile, only the worst of nightmares awaits Aaron. Pursued by dwarven raiders, mad sorcerers, and a host of demons who will not stop until he is dead, the only thing keeping him alive is his own wits and an eslar mercenary whose reputation as a killer might make him the worst threat of all.
Though Aaron and Shanna travel different paths, their purposes align when they each learn of a mysterious device known as the Fifth Element. Shanna sees it as the final piece of the puzzle that is her destiny. To Aaron's logical mind, it is an impossible ambiguity. Whatever the answer, the Fifth Element draws them back together and into a final confrontation where science and sorcery will collide.
Begin your adventure today with Engines of Alchemancy (formerly The Five Elements), the first book in the Alchemancer fantasy adventure series.
- Print length415 pages
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateOctober 9, 2022
- Dimensions6 x 1.04 x 9 inches
- ISBN-13979-8357267887
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A sorcerer's apprentice who commands science instead of sorcery.
A mercenary consumed by revenge.
A mad savant hellbent on unlocking the secrets of the universe.
The Alchemancer series begins.
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"I loved the story and it was the perfect combination of elemental magic and adventure."—Ritesh Kala's Book Reviews
"Aaron in particular is a terrific character, both immature yet intelligent and enterprising, perfectly aligned with his age. I absolutely loved his ability to approach any problem in a logical, scientific way, and find a rational solution."—Fantasy Review Barn
"Life experiences can change people, and change friendships, and I felt that Marlowe addressed that complex issue in a realistic way that young adults and adults can both enjoy."—Bookworm Blues
"The characters...display very real and sometimes raw emotions. Very well written. An exciting plot [that] weaves a fantastic adventure."—Goodreads reviewer
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- ASIN : B0BHRFTR58
- Publisher : Independently published (October 9, 2022)
- Language : English
- Paperback : 415 pages
- ISBN-13 : 979-8357267887
- Item Weight : 1.55 pounds
- Dimensions : 6 x 1.04 x 9 inches
- Best Sellers Rank: #3,764,605 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)
- #2,237 in Gaslamp Fantasy (Books)
- #10,511 in Myths & Legends Fantasy
- #15,857 in Coming of Age Fantasy (Books)
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Scott Marlowe lives in Bentonville, Arkansas, the Mountain Biking Capital of the World, where he drinks extraordinary amounts of coffee, rides his mountain or gravel bike whenever the opportunity arises, and writes stories that often end in wondrous, explosive mayhem.
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I've been reading on this book for a while, putting it down and picking it up again. In the beginning, the characters didn't click with me on a care level, and I had a difficult time worrying about what would happen to them next. Pacing was a bit slow at the start but picked up about halfway through. I'm glad I didn't give up on this title! Once the action started, it never stopped. I was dragged through a world of sorcery and alchemists that was well built and kept me guessing through a number of turns. There was an excellent plot and a sub-plot I rather enjoyed, because it tied in with the main story well. But, I had problems with the characters' names and kept getting them confused. Too many began with the same letter: E. Both girls had similar first names, too (both beginning with an S); and that threw me off at times. There are several POVs in this book, and a couple of head-hops resulted. Having to turn off my editor's brain while reading isn't easy, but this is one of those titles I had to do that with. While the story was good, there were errors in the writing mechanics. Let's move on to that.
From an Editor's Perspective:
Too many pronoun confusions left me wondering at times if one of the characters was inflicting harm upon him/herself or upon another. As I mentioned before, the characters' names were too similar and I kept having to flip back to see who the heck I was reading about. Also, homophones were confused here and there. One glaring error was in the use of the word brooch when it should've been broach. Small things a reader may not understand, but will know something is "off." That being said, all this had minimal impact on the story itself, but did play a part.
Rating:
1 Star for an awesome sub-plot that tied into the main plot seamlessly
1 Star for world building
1 Star for surprising me a couple of times
.5 Star for pacing after the first half of the book
-.5 Star for confusing me with the names
.25 Star for quality of story and sentence construction
-.75 Star for pronoun, character names, and homophone oopsies
Overall: 3.75 stars out of 5. But I round up, so this book gets a 4. Overall, a clean read suitable for teens with epic world building.
It has all the elements I want from young protagonists with a mysterious past to wizards and enigmatic warriors. The opening chapters are strong and the setting is evoked convincingly with characters that while tropes to an extent are likable.
But it goes wrong in the middle, introducing additional characters and settings but failing to give them the depth or conviction displayed in the earlier chapters. And just a few too many side plots are stacked up which never really get a good resolution or explanation.
When an author signals that an interesting new character has joined the narrative and you're already three quarters of the way through the book, you know they're not going to get to develop properly.
But really the biggest failing is one of execution. There's a significant character moment in this book that reminded me of the disappointment I felt watching Annakin abruptly turn into Darth Vader. A feeling that the change had been forced rather than grown organically.
For all that I came away really liking the characters and the book is clearly set up for sequels which I would be inclined to give a chance. Because the author shows promise and so do his characters.
There were a few parts of the story that I thought dragged a little bit, but on the whole the book was very enjoyable. The characters were done well and the elemental magic system was uniquely done. This book is a fine read for people looking for a fantasy that is a quick high quality read.
Pros: To re-attack the earth / air / fire / water elemental and alchemical conceits takes a fair amount of bravery after all the times it's been attempted. The author does a credible job of re-imagining them and keeping them a part of a relevant story. Relatively interesting characters and a plot that maintains interest.
Cons: The foreshadowing was a bit heavy-handed. The pacing of the story was off a bit and came together suddenly at the end rather than having a natural ebb, flow, climax, and denouement. The interesting characters were unfortunately saddled with less-than-stellar development.
Summary: Worth the time, effort, and cost to read, even if it doesn't blow you away.
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Schon alleine die Thematik um die Elemente hat mich von vornherein interessiert, meine Erwartungen wurden aber übertroffen. Zwar sind die Elemente ein wichtiges Thema im Roman und der Anfang erinnert beispielsweise dezent an Baldur's Gate, allerdings geht es noch um so viel mehr. Getrennt voneinander, müssen die Protagonisten von einer Gefahr zur nächsten ihre Identität neu entdecken - und nicht immer ist die Erkenntnis erfreulich. Die eingewobenen Steampunk-Elemente schaffen zusätzlich einen interessanten Aspekt, der konsequent im Kontrast zu den natürlichen Elementen steht. Auch die Hintergrundgeschichte ist interessant. Manchmal stimmt lediglich der Erzählfluss nicht ganz. Zu Beginn wirken manche Ereignisse zu sehr langgezogen, während sich das letzte Viertel stellenweise zu wenig Zeit nimmt. Ferner werden auch Zivilisationen und Rassen eingeführt, die dann aber nicht weitergeführt werden.
Die beiden Protagonisten sind gut ausgearbeitet. Schon vom ersten Moment an wirken Aaron und Shanna natürlich mit ihren eigenen Stärken und Schwächen. Schön zu sehen ist dabei, dass aufgrund dieser Schwächen nicht immer die beste Entscheidungen treffen, was folgenschwere Konsequenzen nach sich zieht. Die Antagonisten wirken im Gegensatz dazu eher schal. Zwar haben sie ihre Motivationen, doch diese wirken etwas konstruiert, sodass der Plot überhaupt zustande kommt. Die Nebencharaktere werden ihrem Namen gerecht. Sie sind da, tragen ihren Teil zur Handlung bei und haben ihre Besonderheiten, selten wird bei diesen aber großes Interesse geweckt.
Insgesamt hat mir The Five Elements gut gefallen, es verpackt eine Geschichte um die Elemente mit interessanten Protagonisten in ein ganz anderes Format. Ich freue mich schon, den Nachfolger zu lesen.
The opening is a little wobbly. We see the two main characters in their environment, and they're both very likeable, but some of the events seem a little forced. Would the ogre really toss the head sorcerer's apprentice over the cliff-edge? Is there no justice system which would step in, this being (apparently) a well-ordered city? Would Shanna really be able to push the ogre over so easily? But even so, I liked the relationship between Shanna and Aaron.
Shortly after this, all hell breaks loose, and suddenly we're hurled into a breathless rush of dramatic, page-turning action. Many books don't reach this level of intensity before the finale, but here it works perfectly to rip the main characters out of their setting in the most natural way possible, while raising any number of questions about what is going on. Neatly sidestepping the conventional gang-on-a-quest setup, the two main characters are separated and have to make their own way through their post-apocalypse world, and end up on different sides, which is an interesting twist on things. And although there is a quest, Aaron and Shanna are simply sucked into someone else's plans. This part of the book, the events at Norwynne, is terrific.
From then onwards, the pace is rapid and there's a dizzying array of twists and turns, to the point that I had absolutely no idea what was going to happen next, or who was a good guy and who was a villain, almost to the end. Virtually all the characters have depth and behave believably. Aaron in particular is a terrific character, both immature yet intelligent and enterprising, perfectly aligned with his age. I absolutely loved his ability to approach any problem in a logical, scientific way, and find a rational solution. This is so refreshing in fantasy, which all too often turns to magic at such moments. Shanna I found less interesting, a bit too sulky and short on initiative, and not always terribly bright. Amongst the other characters, the dwarf and the savant both stood out. The mysterious Ensel Rhe worked less well, I feel. His backstory seemed a little contrived to get the reader's sympathy, and he had an all too convenient knack of turning up in the nick of time to effect a rescue (not always successfully, it has to be said). The magic system is fairly simplistic, but the rest of the world-building is fascinating, with an array of (I suppose) steampunk additives for flavour. I loved all the various machines, even if the descriptions sounded a bit hokum.
The book could do with a final polishing edit, with a few mistakes and clunky moments, but otherwise the writing is excellent, perfectly judged to carry the plot without being intrusive. I particularly liked the author's economical descriptions, which convey a great deal of evocative information in the minimum number of words. There were a couple of places where a character jumped to the right answer rather easily, which felt a little convenient, but there was enough foreshadowing to get away with it. The ending is appropriately grandiose and with unexpectedly thoughtful undertones. The author is to be commended for not taking the easy way out at this point. Overall, I totally enjoyed this, and tore through it at high speed - that just-one-more-chapter syndrome. It's an unusual, pacy story, with an unexpected plot-twist in almost every chapter, and great fun to read. Four stars.