I’m unfortunate enough not to be able to get kindle Vella, so having to wait for the books to come out so slowly is killing me. I love Jordan’s stories. She has a way that she connects with her readers in a way not many authors do. So what her grammar’s not perfect or her commas may be in the wrong place. She just gets her readers and her readers get her. I hope she never stops writing.
Having said that, this was my least favorite of the three, probably because the main couple is not together for most of the story. But I found Gianna’s actions to be dumb. She finally has her family back and because her boyfriend of a month breaks up with her, she suddenly takes off for nowhere and lives by herself, for honestly no reason. If she didn’t want to be near Gabriel she could have just gone with her grandmother, who lives in another state. Why go to such desperate measures, especially pregnant. That whole part didn’t make any sense to me. She’d have a ton of support with her family and they’d probably keep her a secret from Gabriel if that’s what she wanted. I seriously don’t get why she’d live in the middle of nowhere when she could be living in a mansion with all the help she could want.
And one of my biggest pet peeves in books are long separations. This one is going on over a year. And I’m sure there’s a reason why it wasn’t mentioned what and how many babies there were. That seemed weird and the wording in those parts was obviously vague, not wanting the reader to know.
Also, what made this book way different was that the first two books took place over about a months time. Lots of detail in a short amount of time. This book covers over a year and you don’t get much details. I guess the breakup book was never going to be my favorite anyway. Can’t wait for the last book!
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