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The Fate: Book 1: Tournament Wysteria (Fates of the New School) Kindle Edition
Many times has the Tournament been won for duty and honor's sake.
A few times it's been conquered to prove one's love.
And a handful of times it's even been won out of hate.
Each of those times, however, started with the same dream in mind. And involved a dreamer too foolish to care that the whole world was against them.
But only ...
Once upon a time was there a boy who took on the Tournament with dreams far greater and more foolish than them all. This is his story and the story of his friends.
This is the tale of a Fate undeniable.
- Reading age12 - 18 years
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateJanuary 18, 2016
Editorial Reviews
From the Author
Why did I choose this viewpoint and tense? It wasn't an easy choice. In fact, after the second draft, I rewrote all 700+ pages in Third Person Past Tense just to see if I was making the right decision. In the end, I felt that Third Person Present relayed the story the way that I wanted. My hope was that once the reader became accustomed to it, that it would draw them into the "now" of things and emphasize the actions and events as they unfolded--not only to the reader, but to the narrator and characters themselves.
So, please give it a shot. This is my attempt at creating an experience--One in which those who persevere (much like the characters in the story) will be greatly rewarded. At least that was my goal! Though what truly happens ... Fate only knows.
Product details
- ASIN : B01ASWFS60
- Publisher : IDealSoul Stories (January 18, 2016)
- Publication date : January 18, 2016
- Language : English
- File size : 3987 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Sticky notes : On Kindle Scribe
- Print length : 459 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: #941,682 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- Customer Reviews:
About the author
John Ko was born in the Year of the Dragon, 1976.
Every once in awhile, in those very, very rare instances his mother may have caught him slipping, or perhaps on the wrong path, or plain old just not trying hard enough--Well, some of those times she would look at him and say ...
"I see the dragon is still sleeping."
She would smile at the next part.
"But when he wakes, well, now, won't that be a fearsome thing ..."
So he ended up writing this book.
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When posted like that, the characters are all easily defined at first glance, but the multiple POVs allow us great insight into their characters.
The best part though? You have an amazing protagonist that you just love, and know is really strong.... well, minor spoiler, but the basically the second half of the book has him on the sidelines. It truly shows just how much the 'side' characters have been developed, and you can feel that this team of Monsters (pun intended!) will be something great!
Oh, and it's worth noting that I can't even tell if this is one of those self-published novels. The grammar and diction are superb, and I could find no spelling errors to speak of. Despite being slightly higher priced (I got it for $6 i think) than most digital novels, the length clearly made up for it, especially compared to some of the more common self-published ones.
This book has a pretty cool combat system, that I like to call the Color System. In it, each element is a assigned a color range, earth is yellow, water is blue, red is fire, and so on. The characters use these attacks by calling out their names and it's very anime esc. The cool thing is that when the character yells out the name of an attack, you already have a general idea of what the attack is going to do.
The characters are all fairly interesting. Just to give you a quick runthrough, the main character is The Fate, strange but powerful, Way, a young boy who wields the power of water, Shine, a blind girl who sense energy via the color system, Monster, an pacifist orc who is the team's healer, Riser, a spunky girl and "first daughter", Sense, the team's strategist who has a heart condition, and a chipmunk who you'll probably forget about halfway through only to be reminded that he does indeed exist by the end of the book.
The plot is relatively straightforward, having the characters go through their matches and attempt to win the tournament. Toward the end it does start to get mangled, introducing more elements than I think it could manage in a short period of time.
John Ko's writing style is very minimalistic, which both helps and hurts him. It's good that he doesn't dump out exposition, but the world of The Fate is so complex that a little bit of explanation would have been nice. There was one point in the story where a type of beast man was introduced and I was wondering whether what they were being referred to as was their clan name or if they were a different race all together. This could have been very easily remedied with a passing mention, maybe a sentence or two, of who and what they were. This didn't happen, and it wasn't clarified until well after they were introduced that these people were a different species all together, and I thought it would have saved me a lot of speculation had this just been mentioned with their introduction. I did not notice too many spelling issues while reading, but I did notice a lot toward the end that I feel it worth mentioning.
All in all, The Fate is a great and fun read, filled with exciting action and an interesting world. The writing can fall flat at times, and their are a bit to many subplots introduced, but I still recommend that you at least check it out. The book has a rather generous sample, so I recommend reading that to see whether or not this book is for you.
The story is simple in the broad strokes-- A mysterious fool recruits people to join him on a quest: a woman warrior, a pair of siblings, a scholar with a weak heart, a monster with a heart of gold. They have victories and defeats, and they emerge as friends. This kind of story has been told many, many times before, but this one happens to be a fun telling of it. It's a good ride. I'm looking forward to the next volume.
Five stars for heart. If you like tournament fighting anime like Naruto, or the CG cartoon RWBY, you'll probably like this book. And if you know what a light novel is, you can expect that this book is basically a light novel in style and execution. Some proofreading issues, but no deal-breakers; it's functional, quick-reading prose. Give it a shot and see if you'll be surprised, too.
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It's got a really peculiar way of telling its's story due to the way the author has written it and the style of writing used.